Revision Process WP #2

After receiving the grade on my last paper and beginning to realize what I need to change it has helped my writing process.  Reading my classmate's papers has also helped in learning to use active voice versus passive.  Using active voice will help me come up with more original sentences and will only expand my writing scope.  I now know that when I use passive voice the sentence structure is more general and I repeat ideas over and over again.  I may have to take this paper to the writing center and ask to help with changing the passive voice.